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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-07-02 10:30 PM



Take my hand
and walk with me in fields of daisies
Take my hand
and soar with me among the stars
Take my hand
and sail with me across vast rolling oceans
Take my hand
and climb with me to crests of highest mountains
Take my hand
And let me feel the rhythmic beating of your heart
Take my hand
And let me love you like you've never been loved before.



© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2003-07-02 10:54 PM


sorry I'm a bit emotional tonight..thinking about stuff...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-07-02 10:56 PM


"Take my hand
And let me feel the rhythmic beating of your heart
Take my hand
And let me love you like you've never been loved before."

*sniff* This is just..so beautiful .. Makes me long to be loved again.. Thank you for this

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-07-02 11:01 PM


Take my hand
And let me love you like you've never been loved before


Linda, my Honey-Love and I tell each other this all the time.
Just beautiful.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-07-03 02:29 AM


ah, the power of a hand....
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5 posted 2003-07-03 11:56 AM


Isn't holding hands wonderful?

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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6 posted 2003-07-03 12:08 PM


So very beautiful... so many things possible when that wonderful connection is made. *S*
Magicmystery
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7 posted 2003-07-03 12:41 PM


Linda, So simple and so beautiful.... I am speechless for more commentary.

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

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8 posted 2003-07-03 02:54 PM


Oh EA!!!! I hate you... KIDDING! I'm so kidding there. I love you because this poem was simply irresitibl!!!! This was my fav:
"...Take my hand
and soar with me among the stars
Take my hand
and sail with me across vast rolling oceans
Take my hand
and climb with me to crests of highest mountains"

Was incredible. I loved it all to be honest but that's besides the point...Peace!




~*~ KIrah~*~

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie


Patricia
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9 posted 2003-07-03 04:35 PM


Take my hand
And let me love you like you've never been loved before.

I love it all, EA, but this line is the best!
Makes me think of somebody I know.  

Very beautiful,
Patricia

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10 posted 2003-07-03 04:38 PM


Beautiful.
Eric

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-07-04 09:26 AM


Ceinwyn ~

Sending you love & some comforting hugs your way...

EA

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12 posted 2003-07-04 09:27 AM


Kaoru ~

Love WILL come your way again--when and where you least expect it!

Warm hugs,
EA

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13 posted 2003-07-04 09:28 AM


Ethel ~

Turtledove blessings to you and your Honey-Love!

Luvvums,
EA


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14 posted 2003-07-04 09:29 AM


passing shadows ~

LOL  Ah, yes indeed!

Huggums,
EA

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15 posted 2003-07-04 09:30 AM


Elizabeth ~

All those wonderful hand chakras (energy centres) being elecetrified and harmonized!

Warm hugs,
EA

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16 posted 2003-07-04 09:31 AM


Suthern ~

Yes, truly beautiful!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

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17 posted 2003-07-04 09:33 AM


Magicmystery ~

Thank you, Sherry! Your "commentary" was more than adequate!!! Thank you!

Love & Light,
Linda

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18 posted 2003-07-04 09:34 AM


WindSong ~

You adorable munchkin! I know you don't "hate" me! LOL--and guess what!--I don't hate you either!

Huggums,
EA

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19 posted 2003-07-04 09:35 AM


Pat ~

I'm glad that my poem brings happy thoughts to you!

Luvvums,
EA

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20 posted 2003-07-04 09:36 AM


Eric ~

"Beautiful" is such a "beautiful" word! Thank you!

Warm hugs,
EA

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21 posted 2003-07-04 02:46 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is so beautifully magical, sweet friend, I dream so much of holding my girls hand and feeling as though I can fly to the moon with her on a fairy honeymoon! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, your love poems always make my heart smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2003-07-04 02:49 PM


Noah ~

The moon would be an excellent place to go for your honeymoon! Simply perfect!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

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23 posted 2003-07-05 06:38 AM


Fantastic..realy lovely writing....thank you for the wonderful words....

Goldenrose.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (07-05-2003 06:39 AM).]

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24 posted 2003-07-05 10:53 AM


enjoyed this
Neeraja
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25 posted 2003-07-06 07:27 AM


How lovely!!!

Neeraja

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26 posted 2003-07-07 10:32 AM


Goldenrose ~

"Lovely" and enthusiastic reply that added to my morning smile!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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27 posted 2003-07-07 10:33 AM


vandana ~

Always good to see you dropping by!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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28 posted 2003-07-07 10:34 AM


Neeraja ~

Howdy stranger! Great to see you again! Hope all has been well in your world!

Thank you for the "lovely" reply!

Warm hugs and a big smile!
EA

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