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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-02 07:58 PM



Deep into the forest of my heart, cold were the days, filled with snow, your love came and warmed my heart, gave it a loving glow,

I was poisoned by a love that put my heart to death, stole my soul, ripped me apart, had taken its last breath,

One day out of fate, you appeared, a vision of love, my hearts hero, so strong your stance, your poetic kiss awakened me, loves spell broken, upon your heart of romance,

Chains flew, Icicles fell, heart began beating slowly, your love had broke those chains and melted my heart, now my love flys free,

Long had I awaited, forever, time seemed to be my enemy, you came my love, fate brought you to me,
rescued me, my soul completely,

This our destiny, souls embrace, two becoming one,unending chemistry, you are my hero, my amber golden king, my song,I your vermilion Queen,
locked tightly in loves magical mystery,

Always my love, forever my love, I will give and love only thee, across the deepest valleys, near or far, to the highest star, infinity, divinity,

Through romance, dance, dinners and wine, loves poetry and Rhyme, I'll forever be yours, and your heart forever mine, this my love, we have found, a love of a lifetime!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-02-2003 11:19 PM).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-07-02 08:38 PM


You both should ensure you keep all of
these poems for those rainy days when you
need a sparkle in your eyes...

Well done.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-07-02 11:14 PM


Thank you magnus, what a beautiful suggestion! maybe a scrapbook would work out nicely!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-02-2003 11:16 PM).]

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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3 posted 2003-07-03 12:27 PM


Romantic Heart...What a positively beautiful poem about the true love between two souls who have joined as one. Exceptionally written, exceptionally romantic. ***Ivy Rose
TasteOfOctober
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since 2003-06-24
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4 posted 2003-07-03 12:31 PM


a very deep and very touching poem...absolutly beautiful.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-07-03 02:13 AM


I agree with Barry on keeping these poems of yours somewhere, in a scrapbook would be nice
Goldenrose
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6 posted 2003-07-03 05:17 AM


My dearest heart....you are a very special person...and one i will never ever stop loving....i can live in a glowing world of love..knowing you send such perfect love as this....my heart is full and your words make it run over.. wtih pride and a golden love...that only you can bring out in me....

Goldenrose.


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