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angre at the world
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angre at the world |
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luckyme9293 Junior Member
since 2003-07-01
Posts 24tx |
-- i need a new title-- any suggestions apriciated. Angry at the world What is wrong with it? You give everything And then lightning strikes you Your trying is never enough Pushing yourself forth But in the end Always being a few steps behind I just don’t understand why the best people have the worst times And the worst people have the best. I try hard in this world, But still I stand disappointed In the world I see. Threw my eyes I see Hate Anger and Rage. We are tearing ourselves apart. “ Working together for a better tomorrow” We better focus on today Or there might not be a tomorrow. Hate stirs in the eyes of children, Who were born to love. But raised to hate Let the children smile, Until it is their turn, To be angry at the world. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
A friend said to me that quite often the most deserving don't succeed in their career choice...I understand what you've written very well...keep up the writing and channel your energy in as constuctive way as possible ...anger by itself consumes  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-02-2003 11:51 PM).] |
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