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Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-02 05:16 PM

Slivers of Mosaic Ice

Swirling on the wind like slivers of mosaic ice
are the fragments
of
love lost in the equinox of time.
It may drift on the tumultuous seas of life
or
rekindle into a heated melting passion of everlasting desire.
Different aspects of love taking you on a wild journey
up a winding staircase of stars.
In the blink of an eye you are careening into silvery mists
and
finding yourself on an adventurous speeding galactic ride.
Maybe on the adventurous ride of love you are thrown
down a rabbit hole
and
you are enraptured with the delicious
wonderment and filled with the mystery of not knowing the path this wild
adventure will take.
Another aspect taking you in a black hole of darkness with tightening ropes of frightening despair.
A spiraling passion of fiery anger, tumbling and crashing into the oceans of fury
holding you until you are unable to breathe.
These emotions of love and anguish that are swirling on the wind,
are likened to a chameleon changing into the color
of
blended camouflage and in these changes
are the hidden secrets
of
Slivers of Mosaic Ice.

Bonnie J. aka Bon-Bon

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-02 05:18 PM

Wow! Wonderful writing!

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2003-07-02 05:30 PM

lovely..enjoyed

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-07-02 05:51 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed the slivers of mosaic ice that filtered through my mind's eye...

Wonderfully descriptive writing!

Warm hugs,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-02-2003 05:51 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-03 02:36 AM

I didn't know what to expect when I saw the title...but I was highly impressed when I read the poem!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-07-03 07:54 AM

maybe love is not lost ever, but explodes a new wisdom savoring our journeys forever...maybe it's all in how we look at things....like the slivers of mosaic ice you have painted here...a vast beauty of life, love, belief, and the gifts within all things, great and small...my lady, but you paint a lovely picture...Hi sis...wishing you a great day and a Happy 4th...love Lee J.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-07-03 11:09 AM

wonderful write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

7 posted 2003-07-03 03:56 PM

"you are enraptured with the delicious
wonderment and filled with the mystery of not knowing the path this wild
adventure will take."

that you are...thank you for writing this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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