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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-07-02 11:01 AM



~*~
From tropical storms
Rain causes the land to flood
Water   overflows
~*~
~~~~~~~~~
~*~
Bright rays of sunlight
Shine upon the soggy ground
To dry the flooding
~*~


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-02-2003 12:03 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-02 11:06 AM


Hey ethel!

and the sun IS shining here...well, between clouds anyhow.

But there's something very gratifying about riding out storms, isn't there?


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2 posted 2003-07-02 11:07 AM


Oh, yes! I can feel it! I can see it!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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3 posted 2003-07-02 11:08 AM



These are bright, and brilliant.  
Bless you, girl....

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4 posted 2003-07-02 11:27 AM


Hi Karen  
I wondered if you got flooded out the other
day. It was around here, but not as bad as in New Orleans.
Yeah, I kinda like riding out the storm,
too....if the winds aren't blowing too
bad.  Thanks, my friend.
.
.
Linda, I'm glad that you could see and feel
it. Thanks, friend.  
.
.
Karilea, thank you, friend. I'm glad you
liked them. Bless you, too.  
.
.
Heart hugs to ya'll  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-07-02 11:32 AM


nicely done,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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6 posted 2003-07-02 12:04 PM


Thank you, Glenn.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-07-02 12:18 PM


finely "seasoned" lines, gg

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-07-02 01:27 PM


Thank you, Virginia.
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-07-04 05:29 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, I love floods sometimes here, just because we live in a desert and I love to see the drought ease! (kiss on cheek) Such wonderful imagery here, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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10 posted 2003-07-04 05:46 PM


garysgirl - and when this is, it becomes the start of a new dawn...

BC

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11 posted 2003-07-04 11:28 PM


We've had a lot of storms here too, and then the next day you can't even tell because the sun is so bright! Beautiful haikus, Ethel.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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12 posted 2003-07-05 09:37 AM


loved it
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13 posted 2003-07-05 12:03 PM


touch me again please
spring never kept its promise
shower me with sun

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14 posted 2003-07-05 12:30 PM


well, the sun was hot yesterday, even while it rained....but today, there is no sun

I don't think I can handle too much more rain now

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