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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-07-02 05:09 AM


Smiling the smile of a woman who is truly happy,i watch and marvel at you, the warm sun shines down and makes your hair look as shiny as silk.

My heart gluts at the vision of you, your face a sheer picture of lovliness.
A strange but fantastic calmness descends into me, a whiteness in my mind, white as milk.

Watching you from afar like this, makes me appreciate the complete woman you are.
Beckoning me to come and join you, i stay a liitle longer, just to see you from a distance.

Sitting at the pinic table, in a beautiful park of flowers, you look stunning, so much so my breath catches and i fight back tears of joy.
Thrilling at your very special glance, as we look at each other in silence.

Finaly i break the stillness between us....'i love you' i say and mean it more than any word i have ever uttered. This moment to savour forever...!

Responding you take my hand and kiss it softly with your lips so sweetly, this moment perfect under the bright sunny weather.

Imprinting this moment on my mind, you will never leave my memory while i live,even in my latent dreams you shall remain.

Love, deep desiring, desperate love is in my heart now.
Though you are in my mind during the day, nights are the hardest, then i know real pain.

Dreaming of you helps me to be in your world more fully than waking hours.

When in the night of my dreams i visit you in your crimson bed of velvet.... i will bring you sweet smelling roses of vermilion and freshly picked wildflowers.

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-07-02 06:44 AM


Your poems, your love for me are becoming more passionate,
this style of your poetry I like best...so delicate as your heart!

You have a way of touching the very depths, every piece, and every corner of my heart!

XXXXX love, Your Vermilion Queen


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-02-2003 07:14 AM).]

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