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QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-07-01 11:16 PM

while your fingertips
tiptoe over my
skin

my favorite songs
shadow you
from my view

give up fear without
worrying what will happen

do it deliberately

our broken hearts
mean
nothing now

you tell me the same
dream
each day you awaken

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (07-02-2003 01:06 AM).]

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-07-01 11:43 PM

Another winner QjQ

I loved it

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

2 posted 2003-07-01 11:55 PM

Nice one QjQ

quatro

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

3 posted 2003-07-02 12:02 PM

beautiful.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-07-02 12:08 PM

"my favorite songs shadow you from my view"--great line!

Sweet dreams!
EA

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2003-07-02 12:13 PM

Very nice to read, I would change the word fearing in one of your stanzas to a synonomous word to avoid repetition:

"give up fear without worrying what will happen"

just a suggestion

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-02-2003 12:14 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-02 01:02 AM

love this romantic stuff

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2003-07-02 02:50 AM

I like poems about dreams, especially when they come true!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-07-02 03:45 AM

A very good poem, Glenn.
I enjoyed reading it.

Hugs

Ethel

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2003-07-02 10:24 AM

I like this very much. *S*

luckyme9293
Junior Member

since 2003-07-01

Posts 24
tx

10 posted 2003-07-02 12:07 PM

I really like your work, but i dont understand it, its prolly becaus eim only 14...but i get a feeling thats i like when i read it. it touches me, even though i dont know why. im looking forwward to reading some over your other poems

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

11 posted 2003-07-02 12:49 PM

enjoyed this ...while writing myself today , I was in the dream mode

Hope

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