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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-07-01 09:50 PM




camoflaged
in poetry

an ugly frog

almost became
my lover


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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-01 09:53 PM


Great write!
Magnus
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2 posted 2003-07-01 09:53 PM


Wow,  good one,  and very true.  So many
romances have begun from poetry,  
blossoming over the wires of the internet
and falling prey to reality and life once
they meet.    Happens every day....

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-07-01 09:54 PM


gee when i got kissed i became a prince,,


A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2003-07-01 10:50 PM


I love these short and not-so-sweets.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

bklynboy
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5 posted 2003-07-01 11:04 PM


Grand Slam...love it!
Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-07-01 11:22 PM


Oh I likes this
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-07-01 11:24 PM


If this wasn't so sad, it would be hysterically funny!

Keep your radar up!

EA

timothysangel1973
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8 posted 2003-07-01 11:26 PM


Ummm, been there had that done!

Great write Goddess!

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-07-02 01:49 AM


lol
littlewing
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10 posted 2003-07-02 01:50 AM


Good thing you wrote "almost"
*smiling* because I love this
xxoo

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11 posted 2003-07-02 02:00 AM


They can slip right in on you...or is it hop?

Almost had that happen myself...

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inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2003-07-02 06:48 AM


kauro....thanks for stopping by

yes, magnus.....happens too often, easy to
be prey out here at times

q.....yes, you are a prince to yours i am sure..but keep it that way , okay?

thanks pil.......

dixie, glad you had a chuckle

sue...almost, yes, almost, but not quite....
smack of reality,thankfully

rat...

raf.....glad you liked

tim......guess its commonplace, isn't it?
e.a...I am trying real hard
bboy......slam ?  you think so? i  hope so?

rat...yes, slip, hop, all the same....stopped in time this time


inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2003-07-02 06:49 AM


kauro....thanks for stopping by

yes, magnus.....happens too often, easy to
be prey out here at times

q.....yes, you are a prince to yours i am sure..but keep it that way , okay?

thanks pil.......

dixie, glad you had a chuckle

sue...almost, yes, almost, but not quite....
smack of reality,thankfully

rat...

raf.....glad you liked

tim......guess its commonplace, isn't it?
e.a...I am trying real hard
bboy......slam ?  you think so? i  hope so?

rat...yes, slip, hop, all the same....stopped in time this time


bklynboy
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14 posted 2003-07-05 07:02 AM


Read it again but it really got my attention. Its funnier the more you read it. Just hope I dont croak......
inkedgoddess
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15 posted 2003-07-05 10:33 AM


no frogs in brooklyn
just golden knights

Local Rebel
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16 posted 2003-07-05 04:39 PM


sounds more like a snake..!

interesting concept goddess

inkedgoddess
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17 posted 2003-07-05 04:46 PM



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Bill Charles
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18 posted 2003-07-05 06:48 PM


inkedgoddess - ok, ok, so you didn't kiss me yet...

BC

vandana
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19 posted 2003-07-07 05:03 PM


enjoyed
nakdthoughts
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20 posted 2003-07-07 05:51 PM


gave me a smile...only because...I know


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inkedgoddess
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21 posted 2003-07-07 06:00 PM


thanks vandana for stopping in.....
bill......yes key words, not yet
maureen.......lol, wonder if your ugly frog
was mine too......

J. K. Mitchell
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22 posted 2003-07-07 06:19 PM


Well said, very amusing.
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23 posted 2003-07-07 07:06 PM


and you can do much better Good job Honey

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

littlewing
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24 posted 2003-07-07 08:00 PM


This is awesome . . .
I cant stop smiling . . .  sorry

inkedgoddess
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25 posted 2003-07-07 08:08 PM


glad u could relate kids
sue, smile away.................

ThisDiamond
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26 posted 2003-07-07 10:47 PM


My Dear...
Did you ever notice??? those frogs start out as polliwogs, and they can't seem to sometimes tell the head from the tail...
And then...they grow up...yeah right.
Smilin...good bit of hopping on your part!
TD

bklynboy
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27 posted 2003-07-09 07:04 AM


May not be frogs in brooklyn but there are seahorses in queens!
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