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Seven.....Four.....Three... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Life stands motionless in the hurry of wait upon the deserted corner of time. Bean counters scurrying to the nine, awaiting the five before the six o’clock news arrives as dinner thumps the three course meal. Glued to the repeat of twelve, hearing the eleven at seven, worrying about the five in the A of M. Telling of the scrub at eight, followed by the bed by ten and the snore at half past who knows. Lost in the tangle of seven, as the second mill. takes grasp of the third three, six and five where nine is gestation and six is premature. Five again as the clink of eight o’clock beans ground fresh at two assaults the morning senses before the dash at eight scurries toward the nine again.. In wait of the five. And in the spirit of seven and six we revel the four and rest the nickle till the six of seven hurries us again to the nine...struggling toward the five once more!!!. (Paul.....GoodKnight....you made me do this) [This message has been edited by Magnus (07-01-2003 08:41 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Lost in the tangle of seven, as the second mill. takes grasp of the third three, six and five where nine is gestation and six is premature. what a good write,, keeps ones attention.. A voice of honesty |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Okay, you did today and tomorrow, but what about yesterday?  Your quill has a very sharp point! Luvs 'n such, EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
10 2 4 Dr. Pepper! LOL... Great write! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-01-2003 08:54 PM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Gee, Barry, my degree is in Finance and Accounting and my head was swimming a bit here. Had to go back a couple of times. LOL You are smoking Passions with your free verses. Now if my muse would hear my call...maybe I could write something! Patricia |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Magnus Clever verse, playing the numbers seems easy for you. Well done, an enjoyable read....ice |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Magnus, this was so fun, and true! How clever of you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a delightful fun read! ~hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
24/7 as I've never seen it before. Well done. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Ah ha! A numbers runner!  Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful Magnus! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever write...enjoyed! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
followed by the bed by ten and the snore at half past who knows. LOL... I loved this clever write... got the giggles at this section. *S* Well done! *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, at the mercy of the clock we are very creative here |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
wicked write. great rhythm. |
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