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In you I abound
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Your light pierced shadow's realm with same blinding satisfaction as sun's first peek over mountain crest It's warmth seeping into crack and crevice freeing this numbed heart of iced affection With gentle touch you planted seeds of trust and nourished them with tears of understanding In you I abound for I was winter and you are Spring [This message has been edited by Edder (07-01-2003 07:15 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice, and the ending was perfect. Excellent write.. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Agreed, nice ending. Jason |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
It's a beautiful song of a poem... and I hear, so sweetly woven within, the wonderful notes of the awakening of a soul, reborn in love. Thank you for sharing this. Moca |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and nature is in balance once more...  Lovely poem! You just keep getting bEdder and bEdder!  Huggums, EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. Facinating descriptions... "For I was winter and you are spring". A perfect close. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, this is SO in my library!  Need I say more? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
With gentle touch you planted seeds of trust and nourished them with tears of understanding In you I abound for I was winter and you are Spring I like this very much, Edder... great write! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
duhh-am! See you are better then me so nyah  love this...I'm a sap for this kinda stuff... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohhh this is very lovely!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Barry- thank you kind sir. glad to have you here. Jason- thanks, glad you enjoyed Moca- thank you for reading. EA- thank you that's what i'm here for, and reading these pages of blue sure gives me the inspiration. TD- thanks, glad you enjoyed Karilea- i'm honored to be there too! Ruth- thanks so much Kris- am not!  Nancy- thank you for the read and the smiles and hugs! [This message has been edited by Edder (07-02-2003 06:51 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Ed, this is just beautiful...keeping this one in my library |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Dixie- thank you so much.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
veryyyyyyyy nice...h |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
helen- thanks! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Perfect  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
....O_O....WOW. This is...it's...just...WOW. oh my gosh Eddles, this is definite proof that you've captured your muse. Congratulations on such an absolutely perfect peice of work!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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