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Tim
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0 posted 2003-07-01 06:38 PM

I struck a rock with hammer's blow,
To see what lay inside,
A geode's crystal majesty
Perhaps in stone did hide.
I smashed my prize with mighty force,
No cleave but instant shatter,
It turns out the rock was rock,
So it really did not matter.

[This message has been edited by Tim (07-01-2003 10:35 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Tim - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2003-07-01 06:43 PM

Too quick? LOL...thanks for bringing some humor to my most recent mistake...which I had to fix quick, but I don't know that the "repair" will be worthy...

I collect rocks of feel, Sir. Did you know that?

So...one for the library!

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2 posted 2003-07-01 10:12 PM

Oh have I done this....
won't
won't
won't
won't
DID!

With rocks, and lots of other stuff. Think I'm keepin' this one in the library.....

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3 posted 2003-07-01 10:47 PM

I enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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4 posted 2003-07-01 11:51 PM

Great write Tim

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5 posted 2003-07-02 01:10 AM

very cool write....very cool

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6 posted 2003-07-02 01:41 AM

cool, once dreamnt of cutting gems..got as far as getting a pick and sampling some river bed shale

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7 posted 2003-07-02 01:46 AM

Tim, I love this poem ...the subject and
the way you did the rhyme.

Hugs

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-02-2003 01:46 AM).]

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8 posted 2003-07-02 06:47 AM

Oh, does this ever leave a "been there, done that" feeling! LOL Enjoyed very much, Tim! *S*

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