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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-01 04:55 PM

i am my own enigma,

elusive as the ocean
beside me,

dusting myself off attic shelves
that freeze childhood
in black and white moments,

trying to to decipher mysteries,

as the sea continues course,

not waiting for me
to snap another picture

**i am horrible at titles, help me someone**

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-07-01 04:57 PM

I think the title is just fine, IG. It drew me in...and it was an interesting write. It continues to give insight...thanks!

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-07-01 04:59 PM

Awesome write again, and I am bad with titles too.I usually just name them with the general idea, or a line in the poem.
Some people, I know, spend as much time on the title as they do on the poem."sighs" I am far to lazy I guess.

Jason

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-07-01 05:06 PM

fabulous,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-07-01 05:40 PM

Loved this, no it never waits for us. and I blow at titles too

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-01 06:07 PM

I don't go in my attic...too much clutter

loved this! title is great!

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2003-07-01 06:44 PM

arent we all our own enigma's. Good write as usual....and what are you going to give me for a better title, although I think this one is fine

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-07-02 06:41 AM

thanks for the sunshine..

jason..... yes i dwell on these titles ,

thanks, q...for the thumbs up

then i go with anything, anyhow

raf.....no, it never has waited for me yet

dixie,..yes, sometimes it's best not to look
at the clutter, i know

bboy, as usual, it's a pleasure to see you

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2003-07-02 08:48 AM

Nicely written...

what do you think of 'photography' or 'moving snapshots'

Regards
Sudhir

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