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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-07-01 03:53 PM


     


cookouts and swimming
hot-dogs salads marshmallows
flies ants mosquitoes

    


July
Independence
Day brings us a special
celebration to all people
the Declaration of Independence
our nations birthday July fourth
signed back in history
gave us freedom
July

    

bursting in the air
flashing colors explosions
fireworks summertime

A special thanks to sunshine and jilgirl for the fireworks and flag (hugs)


[This message has been edited by QjQ (07-02-2003 05:39 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-07-01 03:54 PM



A wonderful workup!  Take your bows, Glenn!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-07-01 04:00 PM


Well, wasn't this a feast for the eyes, heart, soul--and tummy!

Happy 4th of July!

Peace & Light,
EA

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-07-01 05:00 PM


can you promise me beach weather tho?
Jason Lyle
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4 posted 2003-07-01 05:01 PM


Great job on this one!

Jason

JilGirl
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5 posted 2003-07-02 11:49 AM


Enjoyed this!
Great, artistic format, Q!
Happy Fourth to you, too!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-07-02 11:59 AM


Glenn, this is beautiful  

Two of my favorite forms of poetry, too.
I like the whole thing.  
Hugs  
Ethel

luckyme9293
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7 posted 2003-07-02 12:05 PM


Happy 4th of July to you too. Very moving.
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-07-04 01:23 AM


for me it's work work work...happy holiday everyone...whoohoo

good write Glenn, hope you enjoy your fun stuff

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9 posted 2003-07-04 10:43 AM


Tell you what... I'm feeling generous today... so you can have MY share of the flies, ants, and mosquitoes! LOL

Enjoyed this... happy 4th! *S*

Margherita
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10 posted 2003-07-04 11:25 AM


QjQ that's soooo lovely!
From across the ocean I celebrate your 4th July with you.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-07-04 11:29 AM


QjQ
Well done you covered it all.

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2003-07-04 11:31 AM


QjQ - Oh yes, the skies will lite up tonight...

BC

2dalimit
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13 posted 2003-07-04 12:23 PM


Very appropriate for today.

Thanks,
Melton

icebox
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14 posted 2003-07-04 04:42 PM


Inspired and skillfully done!  Thank you for sharing it.
Martie
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15 posted 2003-07-04 04:47 PM


Enjoyed this QjQ...have a happy 4th!
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