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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-07-01 03:01 PM



Reunion

there is
a reunion
in the lines
of rain
it is where
I find
us

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
S Arthur Grey
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1 posted 2003-07-01 03:09 PM


"in the lines of rain"
So often,
something new from you.
I like your dimensions.

s.a.g.

Larry C
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2 posted 2003-07-01 03:16 PM


Would that be in the puddles?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-07-01 03:20 PM


Helen, I was going to write something
meaningful, until I read Larry's reply. LOL

It is a good poem, as are all of yours. A
lot in a few words.
Hugs  
Ethel

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2003-07-01 03:23 PM


sir a g ...you have the way to make me blush...ty...h

larry..yes thats me...a puddle in melt...h

oops ethel...you snuck in on me...thanks...you are so sweet...h

ok back to my prose i was just taking a break giggle...h

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-01-2003 03:24 PM).]

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-07-03 03:32 AM


ah...what a meeting
LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-07-03 07:27 AM


Beautiful concept Helen, very much enjoyed!
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7 posted 2003-07-06 09:14 AM


I like this very much....

People say that sight is a sense and seeing is an art -- let's add a third, shall we? Insight, which is genius.

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8 posted 2003-07-06 12:18 PM


*tossing out my umbrella*

you always find the interesting aesthetic

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