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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-01 01:08 PM



Emerald Tide

come,
let me
stir you
at the end
of the day
this shall
be an
emerald time
flash from
heaven’s pebble
one green
cycle to
become ripples
ripples upon
gulf tide
each ring
now closer
that was once
far apart

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-01 01:10 PM


wow, what a vision!
Honeybee
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2 posted 2003-07-01 01:11 PM


Helen, you always have such a unique, sensual style...and this is a testament to that fact, it's beautiful.

As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading.

Melissa~

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Larry C
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3 posted 2003-07-01 01:11 PM


Closer and closer...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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4 posted 2003-07-01 10:07 PM


So clear and strong -- beautifully done.

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Edder
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5 posted 2003-07-01 10:11 PM


beautiful! oh yeah, and the poem is too!
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6 posted 2003-07-01 10:17 PM


Love your writing, as always.. Great style that always flows so well! Loved this
timothysangel1973
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7 posted 2003-07-01 11:54 PM


Another keeper Lady!
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