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Dragon Mistress
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0 posted 2003-07-01 05:39 AM



His Hands
7/1/03

His hands,
Strong and sure.
A worker’s hands.
Busy hands;
Always moving,
Never ceasing.

His hands;
Patient and steady.
An artist’s hands.
Sound hands;
Always creating,
Never ceasing.

His hands,
Tender and soft.
A lover’s hands.
Gentle hands;
Always caressing,
Never ceasing.

His hands,
A worker’s hands.
His hands,
An artist’s hands.
His hands,
A lover’s hands.

His hands,
Beloved,
Are my hands.

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

© Copyright 2003 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2003-07-01 09:38 AM


love the repetition and the many hands.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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2 posted 2003-07-01 11:40 AM


nice...thank you...

Goldenrose.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-07-01 11:45 AM


I love this. It's exactly the way I feel about my Honey-Love, too.  
Hugs  
Ethel

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-07-01 01:30 PM



Bonnie j
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5 posted 2003-07-01 01:36 PM


Good one. That is one of the first things I notice about a person and that is their hand's.
Bon-Bon

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