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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-07-01 04:30 AM


Images of you drift in and out of my mind, as the long night drags on....and on.
Turning over and over, i just cant sleep, your face do i always see.

Often have i seen us walk around shopping malls hand in hand, stop and drink sweet tea, chat about our day.
Where we can just go with the flow of life and just let things be.

Everday things i dream of doing with you, see a movie, eat icecream, drink soft drinks, just sit in each others company with a beautiful view.

Drive down long roads surrounded by fields, forests and mountains.
All the time in my head i would be thinking how beautiful it was, but not nearly as beautiful as you.

White snows of winter, carpet the ground, my love for you smoulders and threatens total combustion,you so near and dear to me, as each day passes.

Love has entered my life so fully, your perfect attitude and care i am so very privileged to have your sweet smiling face in my mind, your face constantly flashes.

Your love is so delicate, like that of damsel fly wings blowing down the soft breeze of the river,gently.

Many years from now i can see this being a golden time in our lives.
Loving you so deeply as i do, this time in our lives will be illuminated like golden amber, brightly.


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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-07-01 04:37 AM


Yes, the pictures and images that came to mind were wonderful on reading this piece! It shows a new love, with all the joy and wonders, growing into a long-term and very lasting love.  I enjoyed taking the journey, and appreciated your writing here!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-07-01 06:34 AM



Oh my beating heart! I am in such joy of

your love for me displayed,never will I tire

of your sweet love for me!

my favorite lines
were:Many years from now i can see this being a golden time in our lives.
Loving you so deeply as i do, this time in our lives will be illuminated like golden amber, brightly.

I love it, I love all of it! every word!

xxx love your Vermilion Queen, your angel!


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-07-01 07:08 AM


Lovely romantic thoughts of building a life together...James
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