Open Poetry #27 |
The Door |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
~ By Sue ~ Will there ever be A love so sweet as what he gave Or will I be too afraid To even let it stay If it should one day come I think about this thing called love And all of the pain it brought I think I have had, more than enough I tried it once or maybe twice All I got was a broken heart One that will never mend Even though we are apart The door to my heart is closed I can't let anyone too close 6-30-03 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
The door to my heart is closed I can't let anyone too close oh please bella let your door remain open ....if not for the sunlight a very nice but sad write.. Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
ahh..but it is not up to us to close and open the doors to our hearts. Lovely thinking.. "You put a stain on all of my good days." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep. I know it too |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
But I do hope that one day your curiosity gets the best of you, and you crack that door open, just a tiny bit....enough to let new feelings take the place of the old pain! Great write, Sue, and keep working on that door, ok? Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think once you've been hurt it's perfectly normal to leave that door closed for awhile, the trick is to figure out when to open it again at the right time...James |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
You hold the key to that door.Don't become your own warden. paladin |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
All I got was a broken heart One that will never mend Sue, oh I beg to differ. Your heart IS on the mend. It is just going through a healing period right now. I think that you gained many positive things through this "life lesson." Hang in there kiddo. hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think the door is hinged to swing Sue...when the time is right... hugs M |
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luckyme9293 Junior Member
since 2003-07-01
Posts 24tx |
Very sad hunny, but i knw that feeling. Leave the door open, You never no, Something good may come knocking. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Never say never! Life has a way of surprising us! Loveya! Linda |
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