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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-01 01:52 PM

Absent

what keeps
us so
far apart
this absence
breaks my heart
at night
I sleep in
your dreams
there found
in the loss
of extremes
if you
only knew it
is where
I belong
how can
loving another
be so wrong
one can
change everything
with such
I never knew
I could miss
anyone so much

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-07-01 01:54 PM

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-07-01 02:54 PM

So moving and tender...beautiful.
Eric

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2003-07-01 08:30 PM

There in lies the rub...sorry.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-07-01 08:45 PM

Good things come in small packages....good and wistful things come in very small packages....

Didn't want to enjoy, but I enjoyed anyway...

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-07-01 08:49 PM

Helen, this one tugs heavily on the heart.
Well written, but wrenching of the old
ticker.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-07-01 11:29 PM

ow

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

7 posted 2003-07-01 11:42 PM

Wonderful, yet sad!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-07-06 04:18 PM

i feel this helen.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2003-07-06 05:02 PM

great poem, great title

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-07-06 05:19 PM

how can
loving another
be so wrong
one can
change everything
with such
I never knew
I could miss
anyone so much

Helen, this is so hurtful. Leaving so much
pain when someone loves another and they are gone.

Hugs

Ethel

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-07-06 10:19 PM

me neither Helen . . . me neither

xxoo

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