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Open Poetry #27
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P.R.C
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0 posted 2003-06-30 07:47 PM


I used to have this image in my head
Every night I would replay it over and over just so I could sleep
I have lost the thought that was keepin me from being dead
It makes me feel safe, its something I need to keep
I used to have this image if you holding me tight
It was what made me sleep at night
But now I cannot find it in my memory
I love you but I'm not sure you see
I will always care
But I cannot guarantee that I will always be there
I need you to hold me just one time
I need to feel like you are mine
I have to get it again
Cause I cant sleep and I'm in pain
Do you realise that I need you?



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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-06-30 08:56 PM


Feelings of longing.. A bit sad.. But a great write
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-07-01 02:13 PM


know how this feels, yes
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2003-07-01 05:54 PM


Things change, and not always for the better. I like this sad one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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