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IntoTheFlames
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since 2003-06-21
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0 posted 2003-06-30 05:50 PM



Gaze into the lake,
Look into its cool depths,
And search for the fate,
That has brought you to such lengths.

You can not leave until you have found
The answer,
Wait patiently in wonder,
For what can sometimes be forever,
Can actually be never.

Rooted to your spot,
A choice of precision,
Remember you cast the lot,
It was your decision.

To the beating waves,
You are now a slave.

© Copyright 2003 Summer Dawn Harris - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-06-30 05:51 PM


terrific write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Duncan
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2 posted 2003-06-30 06:08 PM


"To the beating waves,
You are now a slave."

Great lines those!  Welcome to PIP!  


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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3 posted 2003-06-30 06:27 PM


To the beating waves,
You are now a slave.

we are all, i guess
ponderful words

SEA
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4 posted 2003-06-30 11:37 PM


I liked this very much
welcome!

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2003-07-01 12:53 PM


WELCOME! and I must say, I'm glad the decision you made was favorable to joining Passions in Poetry.
Nan
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6 posted 2003-07-01 07:55 AM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry - This is a wonderful entree to our forums.  I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work - Do settle in and make yourself comfortable among us... and check your email for a special greeting...
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
7 posted 2003-07-01 08:36 AM


To the beating waves,
You are now a slave
While you wait on the shore
and dream of much more.

Welcome and good write. I look forward to seeing more of your work
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



paladin
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8 posted 2003-07-01 08:42 AM


Welcome to Passions.I know you will like it here.Feel free to post your poems with the assurance that any comments will be nurturing.Please contact me if you require any assistance.Now write and enjoy.

paladin

....a knight without armor

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-07-01 01:47 PM


Welcome to Passions!
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