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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-06-30 05:06 PM

Do not rest assured in the
safety of this love.

We are too brief for this.

Feel the confine of air
pulling through your
lungs -

We are this.

A moment.

Give yourself...full and ready
to the void of expectations.

We were born for this.

Feel the rise of breath
expanding to the fullness
of this love -

We are this.

A moment.

Stretched across forever.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-06-30 05:08 PM

Amazing how time can seem to stand still
when we stretch that moment as far as we
can...Yes, we are, aren't we?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-06-30 05:20 PM

How very true Eric...
We are indeed a soul dancing in a glimpse of time.
~Soft smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-06-30 05:27 PM

OK, Ericc, this one spoke to me...Live in the moment. This day I think I shall. And not worry about the next moment I have with him.

Did I get it or did I take off on my own course? I have been doing that a lot lately.

I am glad you are back...missed ya!

Patricia

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-06-30 07:59 PM

. . .stretched across forever indeed
nicely put Ericc
xxoo

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-06-30 08:41 PM

Very, very nice Ericc. Enjoyed. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-06-30 08:42 PM

(smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you can truly make the most of every moment and knowing this is true, you too can be an architect of how you want time to treat you! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

AnamCara
Junior Member

since 2003-06-25

Posts 41
Canada

7 posted 2003-06-30 10:40 PM

Beautiful Eric.

We are nothing...not even a thought

and still~

your inspiration goes beyond nothingness and embraces the One, with such tender loving expressions

~~~
Love,Angela

[This message has been edited by AnamCara (06-30-2003 10:42 PM).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2003-06-30 10:46 PM

Now this is a breath of fresh air, the best I've read with this theme/truth.
This is a keeper~

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2003-06-30 11:12 PM

"We were born for this.
Feel the rise of breath
expanding to the fullness
of this love -

We are this.

A moment.

Stretched across forever."

Eric, I love how you do this....

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2003-07-01 01:54 PM

Wonderful thoughts.

Do not rest assured in the safety of this love

Yes, this is the key to be aware of how precious a moment can be ..... expanding into forever.

We ARE!

Love your insights very much, Eric.

Love, Margherita

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-07-01 04:12 PM

Oh yes, Eric...I relate so much to your
writing. You have got to be "in love". You know, I'm sure, that there is a differnce in "loving" someone and being "in love" with someone. :sweet:
Hugs

Ethel

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2003-07-01 05:08 PM

Forever consistent...

and I keep breaking my promises to myself
of waiting for a quiet moment
and a safe place
to melt.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2003-07-01 05:11 PM

We were born for this.
Feel the rise of breath
expanding to the fullness
of this love -
We are this.
A moment.
Stretched across forever.

This is just beautiful... *S*

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

14 posted 2003-07-01 07:27 PM

May we always live blissfully in this eternal moment of love, of now; now is all we truly have.

How beautiful, my sweet poet.

I love you,
Moca

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

15 posted 2003-07-01 07:46 PM

..."A moment stretched across forever"

One of the most beautiful lines I have ever read. Bravo! TD

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

16 posted 2003-07-06 04:23 PM

promise to stay here forever?

freespirit
Junior Member

since 2003-07-03

Posts 24
USA

17 posted 2003-07-06 05:03 PM

this is so true, moments can seem to last forver...

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

18 posted 2003-07-07 01:50 AM

Enjoyed your poem and your thoughts!reminds me of the song.."A Moment Like This"

Thanks ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-07-2003 01:51 AM).]

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