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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-30 04:21 PM


Lost in your eyes
lost in forever
knowing i should come back to the harsh reality that faces me
i struggle
i dont want to go
i love it here in your eyes
but i know its only temporary
that eventually i will have to face whats real
the fact that you arent mine
the fact that i'll never be able to hold you
reality faces me
i cant live in my dreamworld forever
and when the day comes
when you find your soulmate
i'll be left in the dust
broken
reality will kick me in the gut and laugh
why do i dream?
when we all know dreaming has to end
and whether we choose to except it or not
thats just the harsh reality of it all...


*this is the very first poem i ver wrote, its ok, but hey it was my first right?

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-06-30 04:57 PM


nicely written thoughts,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-06-30 06:55 PM


reality will kick me in the gut and laugh
why do i dream?
when we all know dreaming has to end
and whether we choose to except it or not
thats just the harsh reality of it all...

be glad you have a dreammate
some have none irl and in dream life.........

Wind
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since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-06-30 06:57 PM


Ohhh... there's the reality. Or however it's spelled. You're awsome and don't even realize it.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-07-01 02:37 PM



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