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GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03
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0 posted 2003-06-30 09:19 AM


.....BeTwEeN 2 WoMeN.....


Tug Of war.... not only used as a metaphor...
when your partially pulled between 2 girls and 2 house doors
ones history 5 years completed beautifully.. one change of venue..now she sees me differently
im her right hand and shes my left leg..
without either were imobile or restricted to a bed...
Heartbreak..... no compound word could seperate me from the scenes and things ive scene and heard..
every curse word.. noun and verb.. disturbed but excerted to strike a nerve
but love isnt lost thru all the vindictive and trifilin incisions
holes in my exterior.. quick thinking... no prepared intuition
premeditated medicated times where i was your life line
pulling you back from the light at least 2 times
..... history.......
: a child together...... we struggled thru the single young parent misery
it why it stil hurts for you to tell me that you miss me
how far i travel to escape my internal love.. i cant run from myself any longer... lifes enigma is eternal love
... torn between 2 worlds... my chick i talk too is afraid of you..
scared shes gonna be placed on the shelf for you...
and wha is a 22 yr old supposed to do
im glue.. stuck between the both of you
: ..... eliminate all the ties that bind and erase the past times..
then love would be putting the past behind
: but still it makes commoners blind.. takes them by suprise..
shades cover and protect more than Uv rays from your eyes

© Copyright 2003 Antonio Marquis Bankhead - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-06-30 04:37 PM


between two women....
hey whats the problema?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-07-01 02:28 PM


lol @ inked

welp, love the new pic, good write too

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