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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-30 03:59 AM


Show me..
before twighlight
drowns me, like rock tied to
shoelace.
I'm feeling lucky, dumbly
stumbling on
what isn't real.
Somehow numb, my lips shade
their appeal.
You say you see,
when holding me.
My bones feel
like they're weeping.
Skin too close,
I haven't consumed..
Oh, bruise that contours
to my ribs.
Tell me what this is,
show me..

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Bonfirelight
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1 posted 2003-06-30 04:02 AM


i like this ine.
thanks for the read.

timothysangel1973
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2 posted 2003-06-30 04:23 AM


Great write Kaoru
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