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quatro
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0 posted 2003-06-30 02:47 AM



For My Daughter

One day you will understand
what it means to be in my shoes
that you're not the only one
who walks around lost and confused.

I don't blame you for hating me
or for feeling that I am wrong.
It's hard enough to punish you
and to determine for how long.

I know you won't believe me
when I tell you "I love you."
I may not ever say it
but I show it in things I do.

You didn't need that new dress
or the pair of matching shoes
but I can't believe how great you looked
when you stepped out of your room.

What about the dinner last week
when it was just you and I
I can't remember what we ate,
but we laughed until we cried.

So please don't be to hard on me
I have only your best interest in mind
being a parent is hard enough
especially when love is blind.

quatro

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1 posted 2003-06-30 02:50 AM


oh...I'm gonna send my daughter a link to this poem! Wonderful!
quatro
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2 posted 2003-06-30 02:55 AM


I'd be honored

quatro

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3 posted 2003-06-30 03:24 AM


Absolutely Wonderful Quatro...
They don't understand do they?

It's taken me 30 years to appreciate what my parents done when I was younger.

Being a parent is like walking around with a blind fold on all the time, we just do what we can and hope that it's the right thing!

Much enjoyed my friend!

Kaoru
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4 posted 2003-06-30 03:35 AM


Grew up with one parent, no father around

But this poem made me remember how much I love the one I do have

Thanks for sharing this heartfelt poem.

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-06-30 07:50 AM


Your words surely resonate strongly in many parents' hearts!
Beautiful! Yes they are like that and will understand only later.

Love, Margherita

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6 posted 2003-06-30 09:32 AM


Very well done...
Your words will ring true for many I am sure.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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7 posted 2003-06-30 09:52 AM



Thank you for this.  
It is too, too true.


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