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camman
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since 2003-06-30
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Spokane WA

0 posted 2003-06-30 01:58 AM


Hey everybody. I am new to this board, and to any other board on the net. I've been writing poetry for about 5 months now. And I've managed to complete two books and now currently working on a third. So far it seems like a good place. By the way, I'm going to use some HTML, and if just shows up as code, pelase forgive me. I really do hope that it will format it right.

Heres one I wrote the other day.

Undisheveled

I am so tired…
Tired of this charade, of this ever
Winding way

I feel so useless, and undoing direction
Is never what I needed

I think I’ll try walking on the other side of the dream
Perhaps then I’ll see…

But I know it won’t ever happen


© Copyright 2003 Cameron Pedersen - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2003-06-30 02:01 AM


welcome!

"I think I’ll try walking on the other side of the dream
Perhaps then I’ll see"

I like this very much

camman
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since 2003-06-30
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Spokane WA
2 posted 2003-06-30 02:11 AM


Thank you.
quatro
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since 2003-04-29
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Galveston, Texas
3 posted 2003-06-30 02:12 AM


I agree with SEA.

I also welcome you.

quatro

timothysangel1973
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4 posted 2003-06-30 03:28 AM


Very much enjoyed!

And welcome to Passions


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-30 03:35 AM


Welcome to Passions!

I look forward to reading your poems

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2003-06-30 10:56 AM



Welcome to Passions!  Seems you've found yourself a poetry home!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Wind
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7 posted 2003-06-30 11:12 AM


I think you'll fit in just fine.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2003-06-30 11:13 AM


I am so tired…
Tired of this charade, of this ever
Winding way

Your title is perfect and that
particular verse drew me right in!!

This is a wonderful first post camman~
*Welcome to Passions*

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
9 posted 2003-06-30 12:31 PM


Hey!  Welcome to PIP.  I hope you enjoy.
paladin
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since 2001-08-05
Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.
10 posted 2003-07-01 09:19 AM


Welcome to Passions.Writing poetry is a great way to purge the brain.Looking forward to more from you.

paladin

....a knight without armor

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
11 posted 2003-07-01 09:26 AM


believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
12 posted 2003-07-01 09:29 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Enjoyed your first post.
I shall look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
13 posted 2003-07-01 09:30 AM


well, you are new no more...

welcome... sit back and enjoy ... and have loads of fun

regards
sudhir

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
14 posted 2003-07-01 09:34 AM


It was horrible and couldn't be worse!
are you sure you aren't writing under a curse?
your metre is shoddy and so is your verse
of course I'm a liar my welcome is terse.

Seriously though I like what you did, the emotion showed through and you have a way with words.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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just out of reach
15 posted 2003-07-01 09:36 AM




Welcome to Passions !!
Enjoyed your first post
Have fun here !!
Chris

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