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quatro
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0 posted 2003-06-30 12:34 PM



**When I wrote this years ago, it somehow seemed as though it should be put to music.  What do you think?

Maybe This Time

Maybe this time she'll finally hear
the words she's never heard
and if time would just stand still
this moment would be hers.

He looks into her eyes
and she wonders if he can see
all the feelings she's holding back
and the love that's meant to be.

For years they have been friends
and lovers almost as long
she's tried hard to hide her feelings
but it's hard to be that strong.

A tear rolls down her cheek
realizing that it shows
she hangs on to the moment
hoping for a kiss to let her know

Maybe this time she'll finally hear
the words she's never heard
and if time would just stand still
this moment would be hers...
Maybe this time...she's found love.

quatro

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2003-06-30 12:57 PM


Maybe this time she'll finally hear
the words she's never heard
and if time would just stand still
this moment would be hers...

Wishful thinking...this is so pretty quatro~
and if this were a song, I would think
any woman would love to play that tune.


passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-30 12:59 PM


I think it would be a great beautiful slow sad song
Kaoru
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3 posted 2003-06-30 01:44 AM


Beautiful
Jason Lyle
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4 posted 2003-06-30 01:54 AM


musical words!

Jason

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-06-30 02:02 AM


Yes this could be a song...James
camman
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6 posted 2003-06-30 02:09 AM


I like it. I really do, wish you'd write some music to it! I want to hear the song now. I wish I could write lyricly!!!
quatro
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7 posted 2003-06-30 02:33 AM


Blues,
Thanks for your kind words.  You are always appreciated.

Passing, Karou, Jason & James,
Thank you so much. I wish I could write the music.

Camman,
Welcome to PIP! and thank you for responding.  I wish I could write music and after 4 years of choir in high school I can't remember how to read one note.  

quatro


timothysangel1973
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8 posted 2003-06-30 03:32 AM


I can hear the guitar in my mind....

Hmm,Hmm, Hmm.......

Great write Quatro

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