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LastMoments
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0 posted 2003-06-29 11:44 PM



Take my eyes
Twist them to your delight
Did it make you feel better
Or do you need it again
Trap me to the ground
Open me up, there's never enough
Always more to see
Always that place to explore
That place that's not me

I hurt myself
But it's never enough
I can still feel
And that is too much
Wrap me in bandages
So I can bleed through
Then maybe my eyes
Can show what you do
I can't take this anymore
You've ruined parts in me

What have you done
When it happened so fast
And the words that you said
Never happened to last
And nothing mattered
And I could ignore
The person you'd became
Was nothing  anymore
Like the time took a dive
To the deepest of times
And nothing could find
What was left to collect
And all that remained
Was myself to reflect

Everything that couldn't be

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-06-29 11:46 PM


This is sad .. *sniffles*
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
2 posted 2003-06-30 12:04 PM


I'm with Kaoru on that one.....

Great read!

quatro
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3 posted 2003-06-30 12:46 PM


"Wrap me in bandages
So I can bleed through
Then maybe my eyes
Can show what you do"

Awesome thought here! Enjoyed.

quatro

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