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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-06-29 09:08 PM



~*~

You're the cream in my coffee
You're the lemon in my tea
You're the spice in my life
You're the pod to my pea

You're the cheese on my pizza
You're the apple of my eye
You're the icing on the cake
You're the ice cream on my pie

You're the song in my heart
You're the dance in my feet
You're the passion in my soul
And you make me complete

~*~

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Patricia
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1 posted 2003-06-29 09:24 PM


We loved this...I read it aloud to my daughter.  With two big...Ah......s

How very sweet.

Patricia

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-06-29 09:33 PM


I read your title and thought of all the ways to take off on this, and you did!!!

You are the salt on my rim
the tequilla in my margerita
the beans in my burrito
the chile peppers that spice up my side dish!  

And by all means, in case I haven't told you lately,  you are too much fun Linda~



Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-06-29 09:43 PM


Patricia ~

How wonderful for both you and your daughter that you share the love of poetry!

Loves 'n hugs to you and your daughter!
EA

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-29 09:45 PM


BluesSerenade ~

I believe that to be the most scrumptious reply that I have ever received!

--and you, Dear Bluesy One, are a total delight!

Huggums,
Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2003-06-29 10:01 PM


oh I do love this one!  Brava Bella! Roniece Dawson-Bruce
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-06-29 10:04 PM


Nice...indeed...James
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-06-29 10:06 PM


Roniece ~

Thank you! That was such a lovely reply!

Warm hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-06-29 10:07 PM


Good evening, James!

Nice to have you pop in!

Huggums,
EA

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-06-29 10:17 PM


you got me singing Carly Simon now...hehehe
QjQ
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10 posted 2003-06-29 10:18 PM


gee i thought i was grain of sand in your eye,, a splinter in your finger,, and a pain in (gee i'm lost)   

a fabulous write lady,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-06-30 02:10 AM


passing shadows ~

I can hear you from here! Keep singing your little ole heart out!

Goodknight!
EA

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-06-30 02:11 AM


Q ~

With a sense of humor like yours, what's not to like!

--& thank you for the kind words!

Huggums,
EA

Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2003-06-30 09:01 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this made me cry because I dream so much of getting to see my dream girls eyes and see the gumdrops and apples and starlight deep in the stained glass of her tears! (wipes tears) I wrote my 26,000th post about the last vision of my love I felt before she fled from me, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-06-30 09:05 PM


Noah ~

Oh, Dear Darling Noah, I do not want to remind you of things that cause you to cry!
Your time will come, it truly will! Keep the faith!

Lovin' hugs,
EA

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15 posted 2003-06-30 09:05 PM


This poem rocks Now, I'm a little hungry.
Earth Angel
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16 posted 2003-06-30 09:08 PM


Kaoru ~

Now, that you mention it! I'm hungry too! Come on over to my place and I'll fix us up something to eat!

Huggums,
EA

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17 posted 2003-06-30 09:33 PM


and you just made me start craving for
some ice cream.  Thanx Linda....OH,  I
do mean that thanx...you believe me,
right?

Thanx EA,  you are a trip beyond all trips..

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2003-06-30 09:47 PM


Magnus ~

You hunger for some ice cream? Your wish is my command, sire!

I have, without a doubt, the most heavenly, scrumpdedalicious ice cream imagineable in my pantry! Care for a scoop or two?

Sweet Creams!
EA


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