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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-29 07:45 PM



Death Has Many Faces

High atop the mountaintop stands a figure dressed in white.
He ponders the lodge below and watches the people as they ski by, chanting
their haunting melody.
They speed by him as if they had wings, but they do not see this
figure dressed in the color of a fresh snow.
Avalanche.
He walks past many a soul, then reaches out and says with a tender smile,
“ Come my children, no more tears, no more fear.”

No one seeing the ravenous man eating shark and the dark figure riding upon
his silky watery back.
Swimming in the vibrant crystalline ocean, children splashing, adults
playing in the morning sun on snow white-sands.
A young man fresh in his youth, on a surfboard, going further and further
into the foamy crystalline waters.
Attack.
The youth fighting for his life, a gentle hand reaches out, touching this
young man and saying in a tender voice,
“Come my child, no more tears, no more fear.”

A two room flat, one hot plate, a figure standing in colors of red with
tinges of yellow and blue, watching, waiting.
A baby in a crib in the far corner of the barren room, a mother warming
a bottle.
The young mother wearing a tattered chenille robe with flowing sleeves.
A spark.
Room filled with smoke, a mother screaming, a baby crying as he inhales
the deadly smoke, a gentle hand cradles the babe with loving tenderness,
while crooning a quiet lullaby, these words he does say,
“ Come my little one, no more tears, no more fear.”

Death has many faces, you see.
He may be standing on the icy overpass on a stormy night dressed in the colors of the mist.
He may be hidden within a shadow when walking in the park.
He may be flying beside the airplane as she descends into the mountainside.
He may be the ray of sun coming through a window of a person who is lying at deaths door in a hospital bed.
As he reaches out to all calling his name he says in quiet tenderness,
“Come my children, do not be afraid, no more tears, no more fear.”

© Copyright 2003 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-06-29 07:49 PM


a terrific write of poetry,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


TasteOfOctober
Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94

2 posted 2003-06-29 07:51 PM


beautiful. yoru poem has left a ringing message in my mind and for it I thank you.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
3 posted 2003-06-29 08:02 PM


Wow.  That is the only word I can think of right now.  THAT is a moving poem and I am so glad you wrote it.  I really want to see more of your stuff now.
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