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LastMoments
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0 posted 2003-06-29 06:06 PM



I wish you
Would beat me
Swallow this emotion
Blind in me
I wish I could
Feel for one day
I'd sue this world
But instead decay

Every insight
Came with downfall
And on the top
You crumbled it all
And in the parting
You fell to nothing
And then you saw
Everything in me

I want you to hurt me
Because I can't feel
I want you to make me
Because I'm not real
I want this thing
Inside of me to die
But this thing inside
Is taking over me

I found a part of you
Tarnished to the bone
And this part of you became
A small thought of me
Because I'll never be
The person that you want
I never want to be
Anything you want
Tear me up
And throw me away

That's all I am to you
Just rip me apart
I won't feel, I promise
I no longer have a heart

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Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
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1 posted 2003-06-29 06:57 PM


the desperate pain of separation -- it does feel like there is nothing left to feel sometimes doesn't it?  

more time

everything changes

quatro
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since 2003-04-29
Posts 392
Galveston, Texas
2 posted 2003-06-30 01:13 AM


"Every insight
Came with downfall
And on the top
You crumbled it all
And in the parting
You fell to nothing
And then you saw
Everything in me"

I like this part.  I hope your pain will end soon.

quatro

timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-06-30 04:40 AM


That's all I am to you
Just rip me apart
I won't feel, I promise
I no longer have a heart


Join the crowd (hehe)

I think we all feel this way at times.

Great write

[This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (06-30-2003 04:41 AM).]

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