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Pain forgets
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A puzzlebox of truth I found with questions best left in the ground and giving in, without a sound before the answers, left me drowned I sought an inner peace to grow instead was brought to madness though at the edge, I finally know it's what I reap is what I sow And pain I caused, is pain I get and selfish me, I oft forget that I remain my own worst threat that truth is pain, and pain forgets |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I remain my own worst threat." Yes sir, lots of time we want to ignore the fact that in many cases our foolishness got us into some situations we would love to get out of, and ignoring the lessons we place ourselves right back into predicaments...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh thank you for saying so Jason, and putting your thoughts down in words. It's one thing to speak our minds and get it off your chest, and quite another when our actions come back to haunt us. Forgive and forget I say, life is just too darn short! The sooner we realize and accept that it takes all kinds to make a world, the better of we'll be. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
An excellent, thought-provoking write with great flow. I'm keeping this as a reminder. Take care, Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
excellent meter Jason... benficial write |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, a very true and thought-provoking poem. A good reminder to all. Thank you.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done piece to ponder Jason!! Chris  "Said you'd give me light... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in awe I can relate, too well |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
we learn forgetting what we learn....nice write! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Such candor and simplicity, mingled with brutal honesty. Well penned as usual, Darkling. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
it's hard to be as open as this on a public forum..and this is a beneficial write, keep it up |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Me, all I do is throw these boomerangs....I can't figure out why I keep getting hit with sticks allatime.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
So true so true... *shaking my head in agreement* But the truth shall set you free ... at least I like to think so. |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
These imortal words "that I remain my own worst threat" will stay with me forever. Amazing write! ~*Summer*~ [This message has been edited by IntoTheFlames (07-05-2003 11:51 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I sought an inner peace to grow instead was brought to madness though at the edge, I finally know it's what I reap is what I sow dont beat yourself up too much, jay really, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is perfect in its form, nice job Jason As for the rest, well yes I just questioned why right now I have to pay a lump sum back in karmic debt when seems that everyone else has installments . . . I know and you shine here in your truthfullness xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Can i say I wrote this? Cause i wanted to write this..awesome piece jason |
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