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Open Poetry #27

Early Morning

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-29 03:07 PM

Intoxication,
early morning cigarette.
Before I can even take my first breath,
I continue to give a hand
in my death.

The sun feels rejected by
sleepy eyes.
I comfort the flame,
wave my fists at the walking dead.
Unappreciative
of what completes the sky..

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-29 04:09 PM

interesting write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

2 posted 2003-06-30 01:15 AM

Yep, ciagrettes will take you to your death. Interesting write.

Thanks for sharing.

quatro

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-06-30 01:19 AM

Great write Kaoru!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-30 01:46 AM

me too

CaseyLeigh
Junior Member

since 2003-05-15

Posts 48

5 posted 2003-06-30 01:48 AM

enjoyed this one. not one word is wasted.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-06-30 08:21 AM

Kaoru, you share your early morning in such impressive manner ....

Warm hugs. Margherita

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