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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-29 12:36 PM


(i wrote this for you because you wanted a happy poem lol, does this work? hehe)

you thought you beat me down
you thought you broke me
but you didnt
i'm stronger than ever
and its all because of you
you made me a better person
you put me through [edited by moderator]
to realize i can make it through
i'm glad you were in my life
i'm glad you were here beside me
even if i wasnt always happy
even if i didnt always like you
i want to thank you
for making me who i am today

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-29-2003 12:29 PM).]

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paladin
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1 posted 2003-06-29 12:55 PM


What does not kill us makes us stronger.

paladin

....a knight without armor

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2003-06-29 01:12 PM


one test in this life must be on how we can turn a weakness into a strength or defeat into a victory..thought provoking


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-06-29 01:17 PM


There are lessons to be learned in all our life's experiences. Wise be they who learn from them.

Warm hugs,
EA

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
4 posted 2003-06-29 02:02 PM


each and every person you come across in life that you let into your emotional life even for a breif period has an effect of your person...if it wasen't for each other no one would be who they are...nice write...
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
5 posted 2003-06-29 07:54 PM


That's great! And yes, this is better-it shows your strength!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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