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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-28 11:50 PM


i will make you cry
i will show you my heart
bleeding
beating
i will make you cry
with every word i speak
with every breath i take
i will make you cry
i will show you the pain i feel on the inside
i will show you what i hide deep down
i will make you cry
i will show who i love
and i will show how they dont love me back
i will make you cry.

...so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you...

[This message has been edited by exhale (06-29-2003 12:31 AM).]

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2003-06-29 12:17 PM


I like this one. It's plaintive and quiet. It leaves me with a definite emotion, a clear picture of unhappiness.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
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United States
2 posted 2003-06-29 12:29 PM


exhale,
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"...so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you..."
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Is that the goodbye kiss? Serious write...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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