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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
I can't stop crying The pain revolving inside You ate away my comforts And left them to decide Where do i go from here? Can this be the last Or should I leave myself As a fragment to the past I can't keep moving on The road keeps falling thin And every step I take on it Sucks me down again And as I hang from its ends Tell me would you care? And if i fell, no difference Cause you were never there In this place I'm all alone And I can't escape Take my mind Its yours to finally rape Take away Take away all I have I'm the core to this I'm the lost from sane I'm the pain that lusts I'm the one to blame I'm the inner core That just wont live on I'm that same damn core That wont last another beat I'm the memory That lies beneathe your feet I'm gone now I'm that place inside |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Haunting is the one and only word.... This is an excellent piece of writing on a subject that's so ripping most people won't touch it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
one is only lost when they can't be found,,, you have expressed your feelings very well.. A voice of honesty |
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