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The End
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The End |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
It's the end again And all I see Are the places You stole from me The fading glimpses The horizons fall It's the end in me Its the broken call As you write this chapter Of what lived inside Are you listening? Or are you lost inside Can you make sense? Of what I killed in me Can you bring back Or is it too far away I can't branch out It all feels the same Withdrawn from everyone I can't forget you As much as I try The aching involved The heart break attached I can't get away You're tied in too deep And I can't just forget You're a part of me Its been the end And final times Its been the place That fell in line Its been the time I can't forget Its been the loss The final piece That took away That shriveled my insides And locked them away. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"I can't branch out It all feels the same" Great lines in this poem  Enjoyed. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
"It's the end again And all I see Are the places You stole from me" I enjoyed this part the best. Thanks for sharing! quatro |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"It's the end again And all I see Are the places You stole from me" I with Quatro on this one! Great line.... Wonderful write! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I can't forget you As much as I try The aching involved The heart break attached I can't get away You're tied in too deep And I can't just forget You're a part of me the ache here drips off the screen....I know how this feels...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 that's sad |
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