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beachbabe
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0 posted 2003-06-28 09:42 PM


You came so sudden, I didn't know what to do.
Your heart was so open that I knew it was true.
I feel like I'm floating, because I love you.

You are the greatest thing to come along in this world full of hate,
I had no idea that love was this great.
I feel as though you have opened a whole new gate.

I heard that love was the greatest feeling,
But I had no idea that it was this healing.
I feel as though I am higher than the ceiling.

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1 posted 2003-06-28 10:59 PM


Lovely!
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