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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-06-28 08:49 PM



i am untainted..........

watered down paint,
spaghetti without sauce,
white on white,
neutral and bland whole milk,

a low salt diet,

the dead sea siphoned,

i spin squeaky clean in laundry cycles
ride the graffiti free A train
i write on teachers chalkboard 500 X
  i will be good
  i will be good
  i will not say that again

i am a sanitized poet
dripping with generic whitewash,

i am a posterchild for the reformed

i am a bore

without a cause

a rebel without her claws

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hold the applause...........



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Ratleader
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1 posted 2003-06-28 08:54 PM


Like that's gonna' happen any time soon.....

Is fun poem, though...welcome back!

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-06-28 09:02 PM


Ahhh I have missed you here . . .

Poster child for the reformed huh?

Awesome write Michele
I adore how this drips off the page
(get your claws back - you may need them)
xxoo

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-06-28 09:06 PM


thanks kids,
i have to catch up on the reading here too
in a few......kind of vacationed out right now

Wind
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4 posted 2003-06-28 09:32 PM


welcome back. I missed you, that was absolutely hillarious.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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5 posted 2003-06-28 10:22 PM


very good write,,,
i enjoyed it much...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2003-06-28 10:37 PM


A poster child without the applause~
Oh how I adore your spunk~  

Stand up and let me take a look at you mama~
Michele, you are one in a million!!!

IntoTheFlames
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 92
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7 posted 2003-06-28 10:41 PM


Great Job! Everyone hits a rut in their life at some point in time, and you hit the nail on the head!
Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
8 posted 2003-06-29 04:07 PM


Great title, great poem.

Jason

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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florida
9 posted 2003-06-30 05:01 PM


Cute....like the picture
passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-07-01 02:38 PM



ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
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11 posted 2003-07-01 03:10 PM


Woman!
You are one of a kind...
Have you been gone again?...I do usually keep up with you, and had been enjoying having you back...hope this was a self imposed day off, not to soon be seen again.
We do miss you, with or without the claws...
(Pssst...Just be who you are...the best there could be) TD

inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2003-07-01 04:50 PM


wind, q....thanks for stopping in

bluesgirl......spunky, is me

flames, jason.....thanks glad to please

bboy......just liked???????????????

thanks dixiecup

tdiamond, thanks for the nice thoughts..
just trying to tow the line somewhat........
want to stick around a while

dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23
Posts 319
caddyshack
13 posted 2003-07-01 06:51 PM


this was soooo awesome
I absolutely loved it

You dont need claws
You are a lady - its in the eyes

Ohhh you mean in your poetry - lol
yeah - I miss yer claws

you are full of moxie
as is your poetry
I'll be watching for more
as always - lol -



inkedgoddess
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Ohio
14 posted 2003-07-01 07:00 PM


dreamboat........this is nada for me.......im watering down to stay here
read some old stuff
you will see moxie extreme..its the brooklyn in me
ooh to be me again.............

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
15 posted 2003-07-01 07:15 PM


Well, this one is a !!!

I LOVED it!

Big hugs & big smiles!
Linda
P.S. Ratleader's line cracked me up!--and he was right on the money with it!

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