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Honey won't you wake up
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Honey won't you wake up |
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B3jamboree Junior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 33Michigan |
Honey won't you wake up I think I hear the baby stirring I'v been reading between these lines so long Everything starts bluring Is that the kitten at the foot of the bed? I still have that ringing in my head Or I thought for a minute it was just Him purring Won't you let the cat out I can hear the baby wail I'v just drifted far enough away from shore I can probably set the sail I have so many ideas floating in my head I'm not sure why they are never said Mabey because they are just weak and Bound to fail Ever since last fall When I was shown the ropes I'v let go of all my old dreams and my hopes And in the winter time thoes ropes tried to hang me I cut my self down and fell in the spring Now I'm just waiting for the phone to ring Seems like ages since anyone rang me I can write you poetry that'll make a strong man lose his mind: |
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beachbabe New Member
since 2003-06-28
Posts 8Klamath Falls, Oregon |
That was a great poem. I can't wait to hear more from you. Great job.  *~*~Nichol~*~* |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonnerful!  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like the way you look at things...you have a priceless gift called originality. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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B3jamboree Junior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 33Michigan |
thanks for the nice words |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I enjoyed this...hope someone rings you soon... |
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