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The Pot
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The Pot |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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If you need to laugh when you are miserable think of the poor kid with a pot on the head who'd rather be riding his bicycle instead when you need relief from the inequitable think of unlikely trips to a doctor's bench seat, think of two people who'd otherwise never meet; think of the man with a dislocated jaw wonder if he'd broken some archaic law... who saw the poor kid in hand with his mother couldn't figure out all the fuss and bother; decided to laugh at the show in the clinic removal of the caserole was no easy picnic. the laugh that began, difficult to restrain caused the man an infinite amount of pain, tears began to roll down his face unconcious was he of repair taking place for no sooner was laughter in your face that the jaw bone snapped back into place; the man rewarded the child, stood and left the child whose pot created a forehead cleft. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-28-2003 08:24 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
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Now this is creative writing! Great job! Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks for the complement  |
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