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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-28 07:56 PM


Love will never be the same
no,
it'll never be the same
without you..

Holding hands won't
be so warm,
nor blanket me.
Kissing will not be
so graceful,
and dancing lips will cease.

No,
I can't be weened
from something so serene.
From this world
you left too quickly

Because love,
will never be the same
without you..

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2003-06-28 07:58 PM


Love is the greatest hurt when you don't have it.

Good words in htis.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-06-28 08:02 PM


Meghan, this is very pretty.  Thank you.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-06-28 08:05 PM


I know this feeling...but when you are ready love has new treasures and new pleasures to keep you company...James
Broken
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4 posted 2003-06-28 09:34 PM


I felt the hurt in this one. You're a gifted poet.

Yours truly
~Broken~

Such griefs with such men well agree,
But wherefore, wherefore fall on me ?
To be beloved is all I need,
And whom I love, I love indeed.

S.T.C

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-06-28 10:20 PM


No,
I can't be weened
from something so serene.
From this world
you left too quickly

hard to be weened when you need a fix real bad, i know the feeling

Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2003-06-28 10:22 PM


this stirs my heart.  Joyce
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