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beachbabe
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since 2003-06-28
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Klamath Falls, Oregon

0 posted 2003-06-28 03:54 PM


I can't believe you did this dad,
After all that we've been through.
I can't believe you could make me so mad!

I really do hate you.

I didn't do anything wrong or bad,
Oh, and it had nothing to do with Drew.
I didn't want to come back to the very place that makes me so sad.

I really do hate you.

Nothing hapenned last night, I swear to you, dad.
You just had to make things like you always do.
I just can't believe that you got so mad.

I really do hate you.



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-06-28 04:25 PM


Welcome to Passions! This is a sad first post, but the poem is so intense, I think you really have been hurt by the attitude of your Dad.
If this is personal I hope you can talk this out and love each other again.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-06-28 05:15 PM


I wonder sometimes about my daughter, 15 years old...would she tell me if "things happened"? I would hope so, not that I would know how to take it or know what to do or not do...but there's too much out there to not talk about things...I could never be open with my father and I got pregnant. I suppose I was lucky not to have gotten HIV instead/too
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-06-28 06:03 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is such a heartwrenching debut, dearest friend, no child should ever be disciplined this way, I think yelling and screaming is wrong and only brings out fear and distance between children and parents! (sad sigh) I send healing angel hugs your way! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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