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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-06-28 03:38 PM







I have a funny feeling
That if this apple tree
Were somewhere up in Michigan
It’s not a squirrel I’d see…

But a little chipmunk
And maybe some close friends
Nibbling on those little apples
And writing poems upon the wind…




Thinking of you, My Friend...



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-28 03:40 PM


This is great! I love the chipmunk.
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2 posted 2003-06-28 03:40 PM


She's always in my thoughts too...thanks Kari.
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3 posted 2003-06-28 03:49 PM


very nice one "K"  loved the squirrel!!

when ya" making candy apples? or a pie?  

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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4 posted 2003-06-28 04:10 PM


Karilea how sweet!
You are blessed having all this life around you.
Love to you and to your friend.
Margherita

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5 posted 2003-06-29 12:06 PM


Gosh KJ,  forgive a tear upon the apple
tree,  for a little friend resides there,
writing with a few of her friends...

Thank you dear heart...she thanks you too...

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6 posted 2003-06-29 12:17 PM


Me too, Karilea...I think of her every time that I come onto these pages of blue. She was so sweet....our little Chippymunk.  

Yeah, I believe I do see some tears on the apple tree....
Heart hugs to you, sweet friend  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-29-2003 12:23 PM).]

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7 posted 2003-06-29 12:46 PM


you honor her with cheerful poignance
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8 posted 2003-06-29 02:03 PM




I think of our dearheart everyday ~
Thankyou for this Karilea.
hugs, Chris

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9 posted 2003-06-29 04:03 PM


Quiet smile, knowing nod.  Always...
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10 posted 2003-06-29 04:09 PM


That was beutiful. Thank you for the enlightment!!

  

*~*~Nichol~*~*

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11 posted 2003-06-29 07:19 PM


Awwww Karilea! This is so cute. I think about our Madame Chipmunk everyday. I miss her so much.
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12 posted 2003-06-29 07:28 PM


Bless your heart Karilea~  
She was a fine poet, and a friend to so many....
and always, her presence I miss~
Thank you for sharing the shadow of her smile today.

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13 posted 2003-06-29 07:54 PM


Now didn't he pose pretty? I can almost see him smile.
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...

Quitely remembering...

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15 posted 2003-06-29 08:51 PM


The Madame is a memory of pleasant thoughts. Nicely done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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16 posted 2003-06-29 09:13 PM


She was a classy lady, and I greatly admired her, as I do you sunshine. I was wondering when someone would write of her.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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17 posted 2003-06-29 10:13 PM


oh my...this gets me in the heart good
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I had no idea this would get me so....and touch my heart, so...
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19 posted 2003-06-30 08:58 AM


Sweet...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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20 posted 2003-06-30 09:07 AM


Wonderful thoughts...

regards
sudhir

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21 posted 2003-06-30 09:45 AM


I expect you're right, Sunshine...
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22 posted 2003-06-30 09:46 AM


This is so touching Karilea.

Maree

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whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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23 posted 2003-06-30 09:57 AM


i wish i could write with minnimal words... and stil make them have meaning... also loved the pictures too.. good accent to the piece.. keep it up....
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24 posted 2003-07-01 08:01 PM



Thanks, everyone.  She's been on my mind
and I have no chipmunks [ground squirrels...but rare] so I had to make do
with the closest thing at hand...

and I felt her smile

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