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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-06-28 03:01 PM


take my hand walk
with me
lets walk into our
future
leaving past behind
and burning the
bridges we cross



A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-28-2003 03:02 PM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-06-28 03:07 PM


Definately good.. I really like this one
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-06-28 04:14 PM



As long as you do it together...

Very nice, Glenn...

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-06-28 04:17 PM


Very beautiful .... and I think it is wise to be projected into the future, without being haunted by past experiences which limit the intensity of the bond.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-28 05:19 PM


nice thought
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-06-28 07:33 PM


A fresh start with no way to turn back...
Smiling at this one...great job. TD

ethome
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6 posted 2003-06-28 07:56 PM


Good positive thoughts, nicely done!
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-06-28 10:08 PM



nice and full of faith

timothysangel1973
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8 posted 2003-06-28 11:26 PM


"leaving past behind
and burning the
bridges we cross"

Loved This QjQ

Wonderful write......


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9 posted 2003-06-28 11:34 PM


All the bridges burn on that walk....important to take along anything you would want to go back for.....

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QjQ
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10 posted 2003-06-29 04:44 AM


thank you all for replying,, your replies are treasured..

wise man does not need to go back he has all his treasure with him...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


LeeJ
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11 posted 2003-06-29 07:13 AM


Hi, very much enjoyed your poem and your poetry.  Thank you for the email...Your suggestions are always welcomed and much appreciated.  Lee J.
Bonnie j
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12 posted 2003-06-29 10:43 AM


Good one. I can close my eyes and visualize this poem. Two people walking hand and hand on an old wooden bridge.Up ahead a gentle mist, they smile and look into each others eyes and walk into their destiny with no regrets.
Bon-Bon

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13 posted 2003-06-29 10:54 AM


enjoyed
Enchantress
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14 posted 2003-06-29 10:57 AM



Excellent!!

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-06-29 11:08 AM


Very good! Yes, I agreee. If there are troubles in the past, let them remain there and carry on into a bright new future!

Warm hugs,
EA

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16 posted 2003-06-29 02:36 PM




(sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, embracing the now is what's important and special and with your love by your side each moment anything is possible! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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