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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-06-28 12:43 PM




Snow white candles flickering with a shimmering blue haze of charismatic energy.
The aroma of Chantilly Lace permeating every corner of
their private boudoir of passionate romance.
This room
casting silhouettes of lovers in the translucent mist of
black lace and silk chiffon.
Finger tips touching, lips kissing, leaning, swaying, to the
orchestrated melody of a lover’s rhapsody.
Warm heated breath caressing your
silky skin-
Lips cascading, warm and tantalizing
down your creamy soft neck and delicate shoulders.
Heat radiating, heart racing.
Snow white candles flickering in a shimmering blue haze-
Casting silhouettes of lovers in a dance as old as time.
This mesmerizing dance, we all have danced, is called a
Lovers Dance of Passion.

Bonnie J. aka Bon-Bon

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papabear
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1 posted 2003-06-28 12:53 PM


and what a beautiful dance it is... good write..
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-28 01:13 PM


nice descriptions
HopeS
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3 posted 2003-06-28 01:16 PM


Romantic indeed !!
Hope

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-06-28 02:16 PM


very good write  n  read,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Margherita
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5 posted 2003-06-28 05:28 PM


The sacred dance of passion, the sacred dance of life.
Very passionate and romantic.
Love, Margherita

LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-06-28 10:47 PM


Hi Bon Bon...a very beautiful dance of passion...lovely elegant write...as is the lady/poet who articulated this floating read.  Thank you for writing and sharing, see ya later...luv ya..me
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7 posted 2003-06-28 11:06 PM


A very beautiful poem, Bonnie. I love romantic poems.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Bonnie j
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8 posted 2003-06-29 10:34 AM


Thanks for reading my works. This came about one day when I was working on a list titles for a new chapbook and someone said you have to write a few love poems and this is what happened.
Love Bon-Bon

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