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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I thought I’d walk among the reeds beside the quiet lake I’d ponder of the love you wove and the depth of my mistake ©June 28, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Very good, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! short but powerful! |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
"I thought I’d walk among the reeds beside the quiet lake I’d ponder of the love you wove and the depth of my mistake" *keeps reading it over and over again* im speechless VAS, i know that feeling well enough hugs, kelly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And what was the mistake...james |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOhh, Virginia..this one has hurt in it.  Hugs Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I feel like walking hand in hand with you, you touched me. Love, Margherita |
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