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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-06-28 10:49 AM



This was inspired by a shade drawn and shadows upon this shade. The gray bar from a bed headboard.
Bonnie J.


Shades of Shadows

A quiet room filled with shades of shadows.
Surrounded with gray bars of innocence.
Curtains of lace, sun coming unbidden
into sacred places.
Hidden dreams of life and dreams hidden in the
cavern of silhouettes.
Childhood lost
Tears covered in secret, hidden sounds that no one hears
Tears streaming from the weeping willow of time.
How do we find the innocence in the
shades of shadows?

Bonnie J aka Bon-Bon

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1 posted 2003-06-28 10:55 AM


Written very deeply from one who may have
felt these shadowy shades..  Shared by
the feelings of many others..

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-28 11:30 AM


yes...shared by others
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3 posted 2003-06-28 02:08 PM


very good write  n  read,,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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4 posted 2003-06-28 05:30 PM



Shadows are always a very good write...
there is so much mystery and
feel in what the eye cannot behold,
when the imagination takes over.

Well done, Bonnie

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5 posted 2003-06-28 06:17 PM


nicely written, enjoyed your view.
Bonnie j
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6 posted 2003-06-29 10:30 AM


Thank you for all your comments. My imagination is always working sometimes it even runs amuck on something very silly.
Bon-Bon

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