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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-28 10:27 AM



I gaze into the evening sunset and marvel at
the kaleidoscope of colors.
Bright gold's, dusty grays and Caribbean blues,
with touches of misty mauves.
Feathering, blending, scattering, into the opulent horizon.
Looking at the surrounding trees
the sunset is a master painter’s backdrop
for silhouettes of beauty, textures and grace.
Imagine the delicate fingers of the wind touching,
caressing-
Cooling the dampness from your warm moist skin.
A comfortable chair, extra soft cushions, a foot stool
that fits just right.
A cup of tea with mint and a touch of lemon.
The comfort of good conversation and laughter
touching deep inside your very being.
Isn’t it lovely?
Won’t you come and join me in my peaceful Paradise?
A cup of tea is waiting.

Bonnie J. aka Bon-Bon


© Copyright 2003 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-06-28 10:40 AM


This is magical and yes here I come ... having tea with you while watching the sunset and feeling the sweet blues.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-06-28 10:43 AM


a wonderful portrait
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-06-28 02:10 PM


very good write  n  read,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-28-2003 04:28 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-06-28 04:27 PM


I'll have green tea please...James
Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

5 posted 2003-07-05 11:26 AM


Very nice write, enjoyed.
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-07-05 01:34 PM


bringing faith, warmth, love, care and tenderness to the soul...lady, you are very special...this was lovely and brought a smile not only to my face, but to my heart as well...how do you do that???  Thank you for writing and sharing with us...felt like I was right there sharing those lovely moments...yummy...ice tea!  Love ya sis..Lee J.
IntoTheFlames
Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92
Va, USA
7 posted 2003-07-05 01:40 PM


Amazing job...I could never do it justice so I'm just gonna leave it at that.... stunning!!

~*Summer*~

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